Mam proźbe, znalazłam ten wiersz nie jest on w prawdzie mojego autorstwa ale czy ktoś mógł by zbrawidzć go i poprawić błędy?
Oto on:
Two different kingdomes, different hearts
That where that lovely story starts
She like a fire in phoenix's feather
He cold like ice, everyone's leader
They were so far and for each other closed
They couldn't get together close he was under Her skin
She needed something to get rid of him
She had a reason to bury him alive
So many “little” white lies
His heart was eampty antill he saw
That he feels something that he doesn't know
He wasn't happy and neither sad
He couldn't relized what happened but something Has changedshe felt very strange
She was so angry that he didn't see
What she realy felt to him
She was craying every day
And wainting for words he didn't say
And then he realy felt
Whet her all sings ment
They were in love, but how?
He hated her always and now!
And then it wasn’t dear big
Cos’ she is everythikg he realy needs
Sama poprwaiłam pare ale ciągle mam wrażneie że jeszcze pare błędów jest, z góry dziękuje wszystkim którzy pomogą. Mam jeszcze jedną proźbe czy poprawiony wiesz mógł by zostać wysłałny na moje gg, 8194048 ??