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In Poland very popular group of people's are "barbie girls" or "sweet girls". This type of girl usually wearing: stylish cropped skirt and tight trousers. they favourite colour is pink and blue.They wearing pink clothes and accessories e.g studded belt , earrings , juwelery and rings. This girls wearing eyeliner , black mascara , pink lipstick.They usually wearing long leather boots.Girls usualy has got a horrible long blond hair and She's hate a normal looks girl. They listen to a lot of kind of music e.g pop ( Britney Spears , Christina Aguliera , Shakira) or hip-hop music.( Dziewczyny tego typu sa zakochane w sobie). They thinking about themselves and they are egoistic. they favourite ENTERTAINMENTs are spend a lot of time befor (looking glass)?? and make make up.This gilrs go to solarium and spend a lot of time with their boyfriend or fiends,Usually going to a pub , club, disco.They typically spend their free time on reading newspaper for a young people e.g ( bravo , popcorn, bravo girl) This type of girl can be smart but they did not looks wise.I don't like this type of people.

In Poland very popular group of 'people's' (co to? dlaczego nie 'people'?) are "Barbie Girls" or "sweet girls".
This type of girl 'usually wearing' (cos tu nie tak...ja wole...usually weaRS: stylish cropped skirt and tight trousers. 'they' (dlaczego 'they'-(one) jak chcesz powiedziech 'ich'?) favourite colour is pink and blue.
'They wearing' (albo THey werar a;bo they are wearing....) pink clothes and accessories e.g studded belt, earrings, 'juwelery' (zobacz jak to slowo sie pisze) and rings.
'This girls' (this odnosi sie do l. poj, a girls to l. mnoga - prosze popraw) 'wearing' WEAR eyeliner, black mascara, pink lipstick.They usually 'wearing' WEAR long leather boots.
Girls usualy 'has' (ale 'has' odnosi sie do 3os.l.poj - a 'girls' to l. mnoga) got a horrible long blond hair and 'She's hate a normal looks girl' (co to?
She's-znaczy SHE IS HATE A normal - NIE!, dlaczegop 'she is hate' a nie she hates) 'a normal looks girl' to nic nie znaczy - co masz na mysli, to jest....TO LOOK LIKE A NORMAL GIRL.
They listen 'to a lot of kind of music' (nie, nie tak, they listen to a lot of music of the type of... e.g pop.. or hip-hop music.
They 'thinking' (dlaczego uzywasz czas cont. jak tutaj trzeba simple - THINK about themselves and they are egoisticAL. 'they' (nie, przeczytaj jeszcze raz roznice pomiedzy 'they' a 'their' favourite entertainments are spendING a lot of time beforE A (looking glass- nikt, poza mna, juz tego nie uzywa dlaczego nie MIRROR?) and make make up.
'This girls' (this odnosi sie do l. poj, a 'girls to l. mnoga - dlaczego tak trudno jest rozpoznac l. poj od l. mnogiej?) go to solarium and spend
a lot of time with their boyfriend or fiends, usually going to a pub ,
club, disco.
They typically spend their free time on reading newspaperS (intended) for 'a' (niepotr) young people e.g...
This type of girl can be smart but they 'did not looks wise' (mieszac caly czas pojecie l. poj a l. mnogiej - drugie czas...they DO NOT LOOK (looks odnosi sie do 3os.l.poj-a piszesz 'they'-l. mnoga) WISE.
I don't like this type of 'people' (a dlaczego nie 'girl' jak chcesz powiedziec 'people', to musisz uzyc 'these typeS of people'.