list raczej formalny

Bardzo prosze o sprawdzenie poprawnosci listu. Chce grzecznie podziekowac za oferte mieszkania do wynajecia:
Tom,
Thank you for sending me the information. I appreciate that greatly.
I haven’t found any place to stay longer term yet. I am going to ask some property agency for help. I check also internet offers.
Your flat looks very nice. I agree, that the location could be better. I would like to take a time to consider and look around.
Best regards

Tom,
Thank you for sending me the information.(tutaj dodalabym o czym)
(As yet) I haven't found any place to stay longer term. (yet).
I am going to ask 'some' (niepotrz-i nie za bardzo pasuje) property 'agency' (tylko jedna jedyna, czy tez wiecej jak jedna? (agencies) for help.
I AM ALSO checkING 'also' (all the) internet offers.
Your flat looks very nice (although) I agree, that the location could be better.
I would like to take 'a' (niepotr) time to consider (ale co?) and look around.