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Miałem napisac opowiadanie zawierajace pewne słowa w zwiazku z tym tresc jest troche bez sensu. Troche sie z tym spieszyłem więc jest dużo błedów i pomieszałem czasy. Prosze o jak najszybsza poprawe.


Someday alarm clock wake up Johny. He turn it off and get up. He ate reakfast and chck his timetable. He doesn't have to go to work and he has lot of free time. He go shopping and take raincoat because it was cloudy. John leave car on car park. When he was in shop he ate ice-cream. He spent all day in shop. When he saw really beautiful sunglasses he want to buy it. But it wasn't cheap and he don't have cash. When he want to go out he find credit card in pocket. He paid for sunglasses and get out from shop. It was dark and rainy outside. Traffic lights were shine. He go to car. When John back to home he ate supper. Then he were watched TV ang go sleep.

Popraw czasy - tam gdzie masz teraźniejszy powinien być przeszły i będzie prawie dobrze :)

W ostatnim zdaniu masz "were watched" - był oglądał. Wystarczy samo "oglądał".

Ok poprawiłem. Teraz jest ok?? Prosze o odpowiedz bo mam to na jutro

Someday alarm clock woke up John. He turned it off and got up. He ate breakfast and checked his timetable. He didn’t have to go to work and he has lot of free time. He went shopping and took raincoat because it was cloudy. John left car on car park. When he was in shop he ate ice-cream. He spent all day in shop. When he saw really beautiful sunglasses he wanted to bought it. But it wasn't cheap and he didn’t have cash. When he wanted to go out he found credit card in pocket. He paid for sunglasses and got out from shop. It was dark and rainy outside. Traffic lights were shine. He went to car. When John back to home he ate supper. Then he watched TV and go sleep.