prosze o sprawdzenie

Nowadays world unemployment is one of the biggest social problems. Unemployment rates still going up therefore more and more people don't have work and any prospects for the future. The worst is that we, and especially government doesn't care about it enough and situation of people who are out of work is getting worse every year. For this reason many Polish emigrate abroad in search of job. Workers who lose their jobs have a right to receive Unemployment Benefits after they register in the Employment Office. They can get Income Support but this is usually to little money to live on. Here I have some proposals how to deal with this.
Firstly the Polish government should support more small and medium firms. Then they will develop faster and will become bigger and then they could give work to more employees.
Secondly the unemployed often do not have the relevant qualifications. the government should create educational system which give people chance to educate in direction they would like to. This could give us more experts in concrete branch of industry, not only employees who can do many things, but nothing well.
The unemployed may also look for a part – time job , look for job by private employment agencies or by the newspapers.Unfortunately a lot of the unemployed don’t research the job.They register in the Employment Office and get Income Support , becouse it’s the easiest way.
Another way to deal with this problem is to reduce bureaucracy in founding new business. What is more the government should decrease tax for emploers who form new work positions. These two postulates would certainly help unemployed people in founding new workplace.
In conclusion I'd like to say that this problem is very hard to solve and we will never create an ideal work-market but in my opinion if society and the government work together on it, the situation of people without work can be improved and it should be our aim for forthcoming years.

Unemployment rates ARE still 'going up' (a dlaczego nie 'increasing albo 'rising?) therefore more and more people 'don't' (ja wole DO NOT)
have work and any prospects for the future. The worst is that 'we' (to znaczy kto? ty? ja? facet z ulicy?), and especially THE government 'doesn't' (jak uzywasz 'we'-to musi sie zgadzac 'we don't' ) care about it enough and THE situation of people who are out of work is getting worse every year. For this
reason many Polish PEOPLE emigrate abroad in search of A job.
They can get Income Support, (ja lubie przecinek przed 'but') but this is usually toO little money to live on. Here I have LISTED some proposals
how to 'deal with' (moze inaczej...how to overcome?) this.
Firstly the Polish Government should support more small and medium
SIZED firms.
The government should create AN educational system which giveS (system-it-3os.l.poj) people A chance to BE educateD in THE direction they would like to. This could give us more experts in concrete branchES of industry, not only employees who can do many things, but nothing well.
The unemployed may also look for a part-time job, look for job 'by' IN private employment agencies or 'by' IN the newspapers. Unfortunately a lot
of the unemployed don't research the 'job' (czy masz na mysli vacancies?). They register in the Employment Office and get Income Support, 'becouse' (no, no, - a tak to dobrze szlo - tutaj masz blad - prosze to slowo poprawic) it's the easiest way.
Another way to deal with this problem is to reduce bureaucracy in
THE founding OF new businessES. What is more the government should decrease INCOME tax for 'emploers' (ortog) who form new work positions. These two postulates would certainly help unemployed people in 'founding' FINDING new workplaceS.
....situation of people without work can be improved and it should THIS be our aim for THE forthcoming year.

dzieki Terri:* juz poprawiam wszystkie bledy:D