my best friend - bardzo proszę o sprawdzenie

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Mieć prawdziwego przyjaciela, na ktorego zawsze można liczyć w kazdej sytuacji oraz dzielić z nim radości i smutki to wielki skarb (moje, zapewnie nieporadne, tlumaczenie - Have a true friend, you can always count on her or him in every situation and share yours joy and sadness with her is a large treasure). I can say I have this happines. I met my best friend - Paulina, when I was 7. She moved to my block of flats and knew nobody. I don't remember who started to talk first, but since this time we are inseparable and our friendship last already 9 years.
Paulina is in my age with fair complexion and oval face with full lips, shapely nose and swarms of freckles. She hates her freckles, but I think these dots adds her charm (dodawać uroku). She's green-eyed like a cat, her eyes' colour is rarely meet. She's got long wavy hair in indefinite colour. Why I said indefinite colour? Becouse Palina very often dye her hair. once she is polite blond girl looks like an angel, but next she's noisy red-haired girl takes after singer from rockband. She's both slim and short. I sometimes called her 'my little kurdupel (lub jakieś inne określenie na niewysoką osobę)'. When I say that she pretend offended. My friend loves dressing up, wearing fine clothes and many accessories, because she likes wyrożniać się z tlumu.
It's very difficult describe her character. She can be rather aggresive and friendly both. If somebody hurt her or say badly about her, she throw black looks (gniewne spojrzenie) and biting remarks (cięta, złośliwa uwaga) Not everybody likes her sharp tongue (cięty język). Paulina always wanna has her's way (dopiąć swego)and when she starting to scream everybody is affraid of her, but not me. She is both talented and creative person, eg. Paulina makes incredible pictures, one of them hang on my room's door and sings very well. My friend is crazy about architecture and can rearrange furniture all day. In general she isn't talkative, but when she talk about herself she can't end and talk and talk godzinami. One of her quality which I like is she always speak her's mind even it isn't easy to say.
We never boring when we are together. Our common hobbies are fashion, speedy cars and also parties, so we often go shopping or imprezować. Jestesmy dla siebie jak siostry and I don't imagine my life without Paulina and Paulina don't imagine her life without me. We hope our friendship will exist nawet kiedy we ll grey, wrinkled and old women!