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Arghh. I hate mondays. i had to get up at 5:50 and went to the swimming pool. after training my friends and me went to school. there we had maths test. it turned out to be not as hard as i thought. i guess that i managed. after school we went to the swimmin pool. we swam over 6km ( God! why our coach is so mercilessy?!) then i was trying to get to home. i suceed :p. ive got free time now so im writng this note. by the way im wondering about writing a review of board game.what do u think bout it? ok gotta go now. later

Arghh. I hate mondays. i had to get up at 5:50 and go to the swimming pool. after training my friends and me went to school. we had a maths test. it turned out to be not as hard as i thought. i guess that i managed. after school we went to the swimmin pool again. we swam over 6km ( God! why our coach is so mercilessy?!) then i was trying to get home. i suceed :p. ive got free time now so im writng this note. by the way im wondering about writing a review of a board game.what do u think bout it? ok gotta go now. later (mozesz dodac laterzzzzz zamiast later bedzie bardziej slangowo internetowo ;) )
(i na koniec)
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*math test raczej powinno byc

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Arghh. I hate Mondays. I had to get up at 5:50 and 'went' GO to the swimming pool. after training my friends and 'me went' (ciekawe, bardzo ciekawe...od kiedy w jez. ang mowimy 'me went'?) to school. There we had A maths test. It turned out to be not as hard as I thought. I guess that I managed. After school we went to the swimminG pool. we swam FOR over 6km ( God! why IS our coach 'is' (niepotr) so 'mercilessy?' MERCILESS!) then I was trying to get to home. I sucCeedED :p. i've got free time now so i'm writIng this note. by the way i'm wondering about writing a review of A board game.what do u think About it? ok gotta go now. later

mysle ze forma 'why my coach is so merciless' moze tu akurat zostac bo jest to tekst blogu czyli jezyk moze byc nieformalny nawet bardzo nieformalny wrecz taki jak mowiony.
tak samo jest z my friends and me to jest wersja bardzo kolokwialna. Potraktowalam tak ten tekst bo chodzi tu o blog. nie wiem czego nauczyciel wymaga.

tak samo z about. skrocona wersje bout mozna znalezc w iwlu internetowych tekstach.