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Dear Dean,
How are you? It was great to hear from you. I am very sad and I apologize you because I change my plans related Easter.
We do housework all the time. In my domestic are vacuum, tiry rooms and clean windows in whole home. Parent have little free time so they share the chores whit us. We did huge shopping and our fridge is full. In holiday day everybody dress up and meet in family gathering by celebrating table.
I know that your family flew to Kanada. I would like to invite you to my home for festiv dinner.
I promise I will show you my home town and neighbourhood
Looking forward to hearing from you.

Best wishes,
XYZ

I am very sad and I apologize TO you because I HAVE TO change my plans related TO Easter.
We do housework all the time. In 'my domestic' (cos tu nie tak) are vacuumING THE 'tiry' (?)(tiny czy tidying of?) rooms and cleanING THE windows in THE whole 'home' (lepiej HOUSE). THE parent have little free time so they
share the chores 'whit' (prosze poprawic)us.
'In' DURING THE 'holiday day' (nie rozumiem dlaczego powtarzasz 'day') everybody dressES up and meetS in family gatheringS 'by' (chyba nie tak)
celebrating table.
I know that your family flew to 'Kanada' CANADA. I would like to invite you to
my home for THE festivE dinner.
'Looking forward to hearing from you' ()ok - ale troche za formalnie, wiecej spotkane w oficjalnych listach, a nie notkach do kolegi)
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