The computers freak don't (ale co 'don't?'- mysle, ze to i tak niepoprawne slowo) the fashion victim. 'They doesn't' (Po pierwszse 'they' oznacz l. mnoga, a doesn't l. pol - jak to tak?) look at (swój- their own) 'the' (niepotr) appearance. 'This' (this odnosi sie do l. poj - a people to tuaj l. mnoga - co to?) people 'doesn't' (doesn't odnosi sie do 3os.l.poj - co to?) listen to one particular kind of music. They listen TO different music. 'Mast' (zle slowo albo literwoka) OF the time they spend 'before' IN FRONT OF THE computers. The 'computer's' (tutaj wystarczy COMPUTER) freaks love internet and 'computer's' (nie, tutaj tez tylko COMPUTER) games.
'Contrary' (zle slowo - lepiej HOWEVER,ale jak juz masz 'but to niepotr), but they are addicted 'of' TO games or 'computer's' COMPUTER programs. The 'computers' COMPUTER 'freaks only has' (jak piszesz 'freaks' to znaczy l. mnoga - ale czasow. 'has' tylko odnosi sie do 3 os.l.poj - popraw) one hobby-
computers!.