opowiadanie- fantastyka :)bardzo proszę o poprawę

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Do you like your neighbours?
It was a dark, cold night and most of people in small willage was sleeping. A young women, who was living in old, terrible house was staying at home and reading a book.
She was tired and she was falling asleep when she heard a noise outside her house. She looked through the window but she didn't saw anybody. She returned to reading the book. Suddenly a wind breaked glass in her window. It was a hurricane! The wind was destroying her house- every light expired. The women was scared and she didn't want to leave out a house. She decided to call her boyfriend, who live in another willage."It is a hurricane. Come quickly, please" she sad. But he didn't came for a few hours 85. The women didn't knew what she should do. Though the danger she go out from her home and she saw... a huge windmill. She was relieved but confused. "Who was building it near my farm?"she thought. She went to her neighbours. She never met them before. The door was opened by an old, strange looking man. When he understood the situation he was very embarassed. "I'm sorry, but I didn't know that someone live in that old cottage. I'm an engineer and I designed a new, super-power windmill. I build it here to tested his power" he sad and turned off the windmill quickly.
When the women back to her house she was very exhaused. She didn't slept all the night. She went to her bed with hope that event will never more happen.

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