proszę o sprawdzenie

What do you type of school walk?
- I attend secondary school in ..
What extraschool occupations offers your school?
My school offers little extraschool occupations. It is this: theatrical society, chorus, karate.
Which of these occupations are paid, and which free?
-Free occupations it is: theatrical society, chorus.
-However the lessons of karate are paid occupations.
What do you have plans connected with more far science?
- I first of all would like to pass the secondary-school final exam well nd then I would like to was gone at good studies. (Chciałabym iść na dobre studia)

Proszę o sprawdzenie.

>What do you type of school walk?
WHAT TYPE OF SCHOOL DO YOU ATTEND
>- I attend secondary school in ..
>What EXTRA AFTERNOON ACTIVITIES DOES YOUR SCHOOL OFFER?
>My school offers FEW EXTRA AFTERNOON ACTIVITIES. THESE ARE:
>DRAMA GROUP, chorus, karate.
>Which of these ACTIVITIES are paid, and which ARE free?
>-Free ACTIVITIES ARE: DRAMA GROUP, chorus.
>-However, karate CLASSES are paid.
>What do you have plans connected with more far science?
WHAT PLANS CONNECTED WITH FUTURE STUSIES DO YOU HAVE?
>- I first of all would like to pass the secondary school final exam
FIRST OF ALL, I WOULD LIKE TO PASS
>well and then I would like to was gone at good studies.
...AND THEN I WOULD LIKE TO STUDY AT A GOOD UNIVERSITY

poprawki powstawiałam drukowanymi :)

to znaczy były drukowanymi, ale pozmieniało mi wszystko na małe... ;p

male uwage:
...prosze zaczac rozrozniac l. poj od l. mn - np. occupationS (chociaz zle slowo w konteksie) jest L.MN ('s' na koncu daje ci wskazowki)- to dlaczego pisalas 'IS?
..would like to 'was' (dlaczego to slowo 'was' jest tutaj uzywane-) 'gone' (tutaj TO GO-infin) 'at' (to jest kalka z pol. 'na'-wg mnie kolokw)
>>>>>idziemy na studia do Uni...czy idziemy studiowac na Uni?.

zanim ktos zwroci mi uwage: ma byc 'male uwagI'-

Dziękuję :)