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My name is Jarosław. I’m ninety years old. I’m live in …….. and learning at…………….I think I’m open an friendly person. I get on well with most people, but I’m sometimes quite shy too. In my free time I love reading and going to the cinema.
My family is rather small. There are four people in my family : my mother, my father, my sister and I. We all live together in one house.
My parents come from Kraków. They met long time ago when they were studying. When they finished studies they got married and moved to the town where we live now. I think that they are a happy couple. They love each other, have good jobs and are satisfied with life. My father have his own engineering company, My mother working as cook. They both like travel very much, always visit some interesting places. I sometimes quarrel with my parents but this is a very rare event. We always solve the conflict quickly and we are happy once again.
My sister’s name is Joanna and she is twenty two years old. She is studying at the………. I always rely on her, she always have good advice. I very like spend time with her.
Summing up, I love my family very much and I think that my parents and sister are very important for me and I can’t imagine living without them. In my opinion most of us are indebted to our families for many good things and happy events of our lives.
Proszę o sprawdzenie, tekst jest krótki, także myślę że nie będzie z tym większego problemu, ale ja jak zwykle narobię sporo baboli;P
także myślę że nie będzie z tym większego problemu

I'm 90 years old. (cos tu nie tak, jak masz 90 lat, to ciekawe, ze jeszcze twoi rodzice zyja?i ze masz taka mloda siostre)
'I'm' (dlaczego dales I'm live'?) live in X and (ale kto- tutaj trzba 'I'm learning at......
I think THAT I'm AN open anD friendly person.
There are four people in my family : my mother, my father, my sister and 'I'(me).
They met 'A' long time ago when they were studying. When they finished THEIR studies they got married and moved to the town where we live now.
My father 'have' (dlaczego have? 'on-3os.l.poj tutaj HAS)his own engineering company, my mother 'working' WORKS as A cook. They both like travelLING very much, always visitING some interesting places.
I always rely on her, she always 'have' HAS (ona-3os.l.poj -) good
advice. I 'very like' (nie, nie- to musi byc gdzies indziej w zdaniu - prosze nie robic kalki z jez. polskiego, (myslac, ze very-zastepuje polskie 'bardzo')albo napisac mi ksiazke, podrecznik w ktorym sa takie przyklady...) LIKE spendiNG time with her VERY MUCH..
Summing up, I love my family very much and I think that my
parents and sister are very important for me and I can't imagine
'living' (mozna tez 'life') without them. In my opinion most of us are indebted to our families for many good things and THE happy events of our lives.
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