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temat: SURFING THE INTERNET IS VERY PROFITABLE.
The Internet is one of the most import ant inventions in history. According to encyclopedia, it is a “network of networks" that consists of millions of private and public, academic, business and government networks of local to global scope. It was invented in 1969 and now millions of people from all over the world use it every day. In my opinion, surfing the Internet becomes an indispensable element of our life and it can be profitable when we do it with deliberation (caution).
Firstly, the Internet is a necessity for today's computer users. It is, in one sense, the world's largest encyclopedia, but it is also the world's largest data and software treasury. If we do not know something, we can look it up on the Net. If we need, for example, an antivirus program, we can download it for free. However, there are opinions that downloading files, data is a crime. But why we should not have the use of something what is on general release(commonly available)?
Secondly, the Internet becomes a very popular way of communication between people. We can chat, talk by Skype, send e-mails: it is faster than sending letters and cheaper than telephone conversations. What is more, we can meet new people all over the world, learn about different cultures and improve our knowledge. Besides, many people say that surfing the Internet is very dangerous. They are afraid of hackers who can break into our computers and steal our data. What is more, people believe that surfing the Net causes loneliness and isolation. Everyone who spends too much time sitting in front of the computer, chatting with virtual friends can easily forget about the real world.
My last argument, scientists carried out an experiment which proves that surfing the Internet improves brain's work. They found that experienced Internet users showed double the activity in areas of the brain which control decision-making and complex reasoning as Internet beginners. They also proved that people can learn independently of age. It is a great breakthrough because until now everyone thinks only about bad influence of computer on our health: backache, eyes strain.
To sum up, the Internet is part of modern life and anyone can not imagine existence without this helpful thing. We must remember that safe using depends only on us.