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It is very important in what way we dressing. Clothes are our outside layer and first thing which is regards by other people. I would like to describe our Polish way of dressing.
Poland was ruled by hard hand of communists. In that times man in the street did not have a broad choose in clothes matter. Dresses most often were bought in the bazaars and street markets. It wasn`t sophisticated and costly garb, but it was only resolution for impoverished society. The well-off person could purchase the subtle, foreign vestures paid by dollars. The chain of special stores, which offered inaccessible articles Pewex or Bellona. In this shop we had to paid by foreign currency.
Nowadays, after eighteen years of capitalism our dress trends are changing, but unfortunately some of the socialist habits still remain. Polish people want to be in vogue, but not always it is turn out. Especially youth try to buy clothes produced by noted company like Puma, Adidas or Nike which are regard as expensive and reined marks. Poles do not know or do not want to know that this marks are ordinary and common in the world. The real solid and famous brands are rather unreachable for majority of the common people. Average citizen can`t afford for example merchandise of Armani, Boss, Chanel, Dior. This producers are designed for richer social strum class.
I consider that in Polish exists another style which is worth to notice. OI think about very popular track suits and all kind of wide, hooded sweatshirt. This way of dressing is intendent for indigent population of Western Europe and North America, but made a stunning career in Polish.
The last issue which I want to talk over is problem of second-hand shops. In our country shopping in that stores is still derided. Poles judge that this kind of stores is for poor people without taste. In highly developed states it is respected alternative for people who want to dress cheaply and stylishly, especially for students.
Summing up I suppose that Poles are far away the rest of civilized world. We chase after new trends in fashion, but this pursuit does not yield positive results for historical and social reasons.


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Pozdrawiam.
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'It is very important in what way we dressing' (zrob to zdanie inaczej...The way we dress...). Clothes are our outside layer and first thing which is 'regards' REGARDED by other people. I would like to describe 'our' THE Polish way of dressing.
Poland was ruled by THE hard hand of Communists. In 'that' THOSE times THE man in the street did not have a broad 'choose' CHOICE in 'clothes matter' (tutaj zle, inaczej...in the matter of clothes). 'Dresses' (czy tulko mowisz o kobietach, bo wczesniej o 'man in the street'?) most often were bought in the bazaars and street markets. It wasn`t A sophisticated and costly garb, but it was THE only resolution for AN impoverished society. The well-off person could purchase the subtle, foreign vestures (tutaj dodaj gdzie?) paid by dollars. The chain of special stores, which offered inaccessible articles WERE Pewex or Bellona. In this shop 'we'(napisz 'they') had to 'paid' PAY by foreign currency.
Polish people want to be in vogue, but 'not always it is turn out' (napisz to inaczej...this does not ...).
'Especially youth' THE youth, especially) try to buy clothes produced by noted company like Puma, Adidas or Nike which are regardED as expensive and 'reined' (nie, nie to slowo-) 'marks' BRANDS.
Poles do not know or do not want to know that 'this' THESE 'marks' BRANDS are ordinary and common in the world.
AN average citizen can`t afford for example THE merchandise of Armani, Boss, Chanel, Dior. 'This' (jak mowimy o l.mn, to THESE producers are 'designed' (napisz destined) for richer social strATum class.
I consider that in 'Polish' POLAND THERE exists another style which is worth 'to
notice' NOTICING. I AM thinkING about THE very popular track suits and all kindS of wide, hooded sweatshirt. This way of dressing is intendeT for indigent
population of Western Europe and North America, but made a stunning
career in 'Polish' POLAND (albo Polish fashion).
In our country shopping in 'that' THOSE stores is still derided. Poles
judge that 'this' THESE (l. mnopga) kind of stores 'is' aRE for poor people without taste. In highly developed states it is A respected alternative for people who want to dress cheaply and stylishly, especially for students.
Summing up I suppose that Poles are far away FROM the rest of civilized
world.
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