Proszę o sprawdzenie (łatwe)PILNE!

Miałam odpowiedziec na pytania aczkolwiek nie wiem czy poprawnie to zrobilam.
1.What time are you arraving at Gatwick airport?
2.Do you have a mobile phone?
3.Could you also tell me a few more thnigs about yourself?
4.Is there anything you can't eat or drink?
5.Do you smoke?
6.Are you going to go back to Russia after the end of course?

ODPOWIEDZI:
1.I arraving at airport at 10 a.m on Monday 15th of August
2.Yes I have mobile phone and your number so when he train arrive on time I as soon as possible call to you.
3.So I'm very talkative person and moreover I like animals, so if you have it I will be happy,what's more I always like sleep very long because I'm a big sleepyhead.
4.I can eat and drink everything.
5.After course I immedietly go to Russia.



DZIEKUJE Z GORY!
BARDZO PILNE!

1.I AM 'arraving' (ortog) at THE airport at 10 a.m on Monday 15th of August
2.Yes I have A mobile phone and your number, so when The train arriveS 'on
time' (niepotr) 'I' (w zym miejscu) as soon as possible I WILL call 'to' (niepotr) you.
3.So I'm very talkative person and moreover I like animals, so if you
have 'it' (ale 'it' odnosi sie do animalS-l. mn- dlaczego 'it'?) I will be happy,what's more I always like TO sleep very long because I'm a big sleepyhead.
4.ok
5.After THE course I WILL 'immedietly' (ortog) go BACK to Russia.
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dziękuje bardzo mocno!

Czyli ma byc I'm arraving ?

>>>Czyli ma byc I'm arraving NIE,... ma byc I'm ARRIVING

Ok dziekuje slicznie.
A mam jeszcze takie pytanie czy zdanie:
Na początku chciałabym podziekować Ci za Twój poprzedni list, może brzmiec:
At the beginning thank you very much for your last later ?

Mam nadzieję ze mnie odrazu polubisz:
I hope so that you come to like me

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>>>At the beginning I WOULD LIKE TO thank you very much for your last 'later' LETTER (uwazaj na literowki!)? (later-to znaczy pozniej)
>I hope 'so' (niepotr) that you come to like me