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Bardzo proszę o sprawdzenie błędów i szczególnie, co niestety jest moją piętą Achillesową poprawienie powtórzeń.
Za okazaną pomoc z góry wszystkim dziękuję

Nowadays word is developing at a dizzying pace, so there are more and more electronic appliances, whose faclitate our work and everyday life. However many people claim that they aren’t life essentials.I strongly believed that it is not possible to live without them.
To begin with, electronic facilities help us to keep stay in touch with our relatives and friends. Parents go to work, children go to school, so they can easy get in touch through for example computes and mobile phones.
Secondly Internet, radio and TV boarden our knowledge about world and places , where we can not visit and see. What is more they keep us informed about disasters, warms for example about war in Iraq.
Thirdly electronic appliances facalitate our life. We can pay our bills through Internet when we can’t do it personally. Eldery person can do shpping in Internet and they don’t have to carry heavy bags
On the other hand many people state that people can manage without electronic devices.They refer to history, because people in the past did’n have any computers, mobile phones and other applinaces like that and they lived normallly.
To sum up that view has advantages and drawbacks. I personally can not imagine life without electronic appliances.We need them to keep up with today’s world.

Nowadays THE 'word' (ortog?) is developing at a 'dizzying' (zly register) pace, so there are more nd more electronic appliances, 'whose' WHICH faclitate our work and everyday life. However many people claim that they 'aren't' (tego nie lubie - ARE NOT) life essentials.I strongly 'believed' (kiedys tak wierzylas, a teraz?- czas.) that it is not possible to live without them.
To begin with, electronic facilities (podaj przyklad) help us to keep stay in touch with our relatives and friends. Parents go to work, children go to
school, so they can 'easy' (zla czesc zdania - tutaj EASILY) get in touch through for example computeRs and mobile phones.
Secondly Internet, radio and TV boarden our knowledge about THE world
and places, where we 'can not' (lepiej HAVE NOT VISITED) visit and see. What is more they keep us informed about disasters, 'warms'? for example about war in Iraq.
Thirdly electronic appliances 'facalitate' (ortog) our life. We can pay our
bills through THE Internet when we can't do it personally. AN 'eldery' (ortog) person can do 'shpping' (ortog) BY THE 'in' (niepotr) Internet and they don't have to carry heavy bags.
They refer to history, because people in the past (napisz kiedy) 'did'n' (ortog) have any computers, mobile phones and other 'applinaces' (ortog) like that and they lived normally.
To sum up 'that view' (ale jakie?) has advantages and drawbacks. I personally can not imagine life without electronic 'appliances' (na slowo appliances uzyj 'gadgets').

Szczerze mowiac nie chce mi sie czytac calosci, ale rzucilo mi sie w oczy ''can not''. Jesli dobrze sie orientuje nie ma czegos takiego. Powinno byc ''cannot''.

zle sie orientujesz.

Bardzo dziękuję za pomoc. Pozdrawiam:)

http://www.getionary.pl/search?query=can&from=ang_pol&ln=pl

Naprawde? Pomagasz komus w angielskim, a nie znasz takich podstaw?

>Naprawde? Pomagasz komus w angielskim, a nie znasz takich podstaw?

No to sie wszyscy doksztalcmy, w gramatyce i w googlowaniu:

http://motivatedgrammar.wordpress.com/2007/10/27/inner-spaces-iii-can-not-be-split/

http://www.askoxford.com/asktheexperts/faq/aboutspelling/cannot

Try not to help them, please. Get a date or something.
You need all the help you can get. The right date might do it.

>Naprawde? Pomagasz komus w angielskim, a nie znasz takich podstaw
bez komentarza.