[Angielski] Proszę o sprawdzenie dialogu

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-> Good morning Mr. Abbasi.

>> Good morning. Who are you?

-> I am a Farrah Keating's sister. MY sister knocked down your daughter a few week ago.

>> I don't feel like talking with you. Sorry...

-> Mr. Abbasi, I am feeling very unpleasantly. Could you talk with me?

>> Well, I have a few questions for you. Tell me how the accident happened?

-> My sister was drunk. She was coming back from the party when it happened.
Your daughter crossed a street and my sister didn't see her.

>> She shouldn't drive. Why didn't she stop to help my daughter? You sister is irresponsible!

-> I am sorry. Farrah was scared and she panicked. She didn't know what she must did, so she ran away.

>> I am fearful. My daughter has a severe injuries to her back and legs.
I hate your sister!

-> Mr Abbasi, I am unpleasantly. I know that my sister made a mistake. You must forgive her, please!

>> I am very annoyed. In my opinion Mrs. Keating's punishment isn't fair.
She was driving at fifty miles per hour in a thirty miles pper hour zone,
she didn't help mu daughter and she was drunk. This is a totally irresponsible behaviour.
Your sister should be sentenced to prison!

-> I totally disagree with you! Prison sentence isn't the best punishment.
My sister is vey good woman und she feels remorse!
Byłbym wdzięczny gdyby ktoś mógłby pomóc mi poprawić błędy. Ewentualnie wytłumaczyć co jest nie tak. Z góry dziękuje
>-> Good morning Mr. Abbasi.
>
>>> Good morning. Who are you?
>
>-> I am {} Farrah Keating's sister. My sister knocked down your
>daughter a few {weeks} ago.
>
>>> I don't feel like talking {to} you. Sorry...
>
>-> Mr. Abbasi, I am feeling very {uncomfortable}. Could you talk {to}
>me?
>
>>> Well, I have a few questions {to} you. Tell me how the
>accident happened?
>
>-> My sister was drunk. She was coming back from {a} party when it
>happened.
> Your daughter {was crossing the} street and my sister didn't see her.
>
>>> She shouldn't {have been driving}. Why didn't she stop to help my daughter?
>You sister is irresponsible!
>
>-> I am sorry. Farrah was scared and she panicked. She didn't know
>what she {was to do}, so she ran away.
>
>>> I am fearful. My daughter has {sustained} severe injuries to her back
>and legs.
> I hate your sister!
>
>-> Mr Abbasi, I am {terribly sorry}. I know that my sister made a
>mistake. You must forgive her, please!
>
>>> I am very annoyed. In my opinion, Mrs. Keating's {sentence}
>isn't fair.
> She {had been} driving at fifty miles per hour in a {thirty-miles-per} hour
>zone,
> she didn't help {my} daughter and she was drunk. This is a totally
>irresponsible behaviour.
> Your sister should be {thrown} to prison!
>
>-> I totally disagree with you! Prison sentence isn't the best
>punishment.
> My sister is {a very} good woman, {and} she feels remorse {for her crime}!
"a few weeks ago."
"Well, I have a few questions to ask you."
"She shouldn't have driven."
"She didn't know what to do, so she ran away."
"I feel unpleasantly."

No i kilka literówek, które na pewno zauwyażysz. Myślę, że są jeszcze jakieś błędy ale to już ci bardziej zaawansowani muszą poprawić ;]
Dziękuję wszystkim za pomoc :)

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