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Wady i zalety internetu
Can you imagine your life without the Internet? It may be difficult for some to think about the world without it. In this days and ages the Internet is used by almost everyone. Except many advantages it possess as well some disadvantages.
To start with, on the Internet students can find a lot of information, which are need at their school. Moreover via the Internet one may to do the shopping or to pay a bank accounts. Thanks to the Internet it is possible to meet some interesting people, sometimes it happens that one, who meet through the Internet get married and are really happy. Frequently, some people renew their old acquaintances. In addition to it may easily send emails or some photograpes to person living on the other country or continent.
On the other hand the Internet have some drawbacks. Many people are against and think that surfing the Internet is an unnecessary activity that takes a lot of time. Unfortunately in particuralry children spend too much time on the playing in games with a lot of violent. They can invite some forbidden web pages too.
Furthermore, people who may meet via the Internet may be not the same who we excpected. Other disadvanatge can be that the bought issues may be failed or the Internet sellers can deceive us and it can be difficult to regain the money.
To sum up, the Internet may somethimes be a nuistance, but in my opinion, life with it is much easier and many people could not function withou it.

Mógłby ktoś to sprawdzić, bardzo mi zależy;)

In 'this' (ale days to l. mn- tutaj THESE) days 'and ages' (niepotr) the Internet is used by almost everyone.(mozesz tutaj wymienic tych ktorzy tego nie uzywaja).
Except FOR ITS many advantages it ALSO possessES 'as well' (niepotr) some disadvantages.
To start with, on the Internet students can find a lot of information,
which 'are' IS needED 'at' FOR their school WORK. Moreover via the Internet one may 'to' (niepotr) do the shopping or 'to' (niepotr) pay 'a' (przy l. mn. nie uzywamy 'a') bank accounts. Thanks to the Internet it is possible to meet some interesting people. Sometimes it MAY happen that THE one, who WE MAY meet through the Internet IS THE ONE WHOM WE WILL 'get married' MARRY and WE WILL BE 'are' (niepotr) really happy.
Frequently, some people renew their old acquaintances (tutaj cos brakuje w tym zdaniu). In addition to 'it' (do czego to 'it' sie odnosi?) may easily send emails or some 'photograpes' (ortog) to A person living 'on' IN 'the other' ANOTHER country or IN ANOTHER continent.
On the other hand the Internet 'have' HAS some drawbacks. Many people are
against IUT and think that surfing the Internet is an unnecessary activity
that takes a lot of time. Unfortunately, in particuralry children spend
too much time 'on the' (niepotr) playing 'in' (niepotr) games with a lot of violent SCENES. They can 'invite some forbidden web pages too' (zmien to troche- bo to nie o to chodzi.).
Furthermore, people who WE may meet via the Internet may be not the same
'who' AS we 'excpected' (ortog). ANOther 'disadvanatge' (ortog) can be that 'the' (niepotr) ANY PRODUCTS bought 'issues' (niepotr) may 'be failed' FAIL or the Internet sellers can deceive us and it can be difficult to 'regain' (uzyj slowo recoup) the money.
To sum up, the Internet may somethimes be a 'nuistance' (ortog), but in my
opinion, life with it is much easier and many people could not
function 'withou' (ortog) it.

Wielkie dzięki;D