Advertising is an effective way of selling new products, and many
people argue that its effectiveness brainwashes us into unnecessary
spending. (nie jestem pewna, ze sam to zdanie napisales)
In arguments below you can see that advertising increases 'selling' THE SALES OF well-known and frequently shown products.
A lot of advertisements are shown in the evenings because then THERE 'is' the highest rate of watching TV. A lot of people buy products which are well and often advertised, because 'of thinking' THEY THINK THAT when something is frequently shown, it has to be useful. When someone 'will see' SEES something like “70% off" on 'the' A shop's door they enter (ale co? the shop) without thinking and buy 'even not needed goods' (napisz to inaczej...goods which they do not even need).
What is more, advertising raises money for a huge number of sporting
events and artistic performanceS. Without sponsorship from companies
who advertise their products, these events would disappear because of
lack of 'founding' (zle slowo).
The most annoying thing for 'the' (niepotr) most of people, 'is' (niepotr) when it comes to advertisements is that these last too long, especially when we watch a movie or an interesting show. We have to wait more than ten minutes 'to' (nie wiem, czy rozpoznajesz roznice pomiedzy 'to see' i 'and see' pomysl ktora lepiej pasuje) see the same advertising over and over again.
To sum up, all people 'are buying' BUY goods which are frequently shown on
TV or ON billboards. In my opinion advertisement increases excessive
'consuming' CONSUMPTION because THE well-off people buy things which are not necessary and useless for them.
Arguments against are not as strong as those against.....Pomysl o tym zdaniu.
Mysle, ze w rozprawce nie powinnies dawac swojej opinii, tylko argumenty za i przeciw.