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My favorite place is RURA.This is my playground.This place there is in Wrocław.There are some swings, a sandbox and benches.There , usually I meet whit my friends.We often plays in soccer and plays at war.Playground is place where I have a good time.
This place is in wrocłwaw.(a nie there is)
swings? przecież to huśtać się...chyba chodziło ci o huśtawkę?
/In playground I usually meet (whit?) my friends.

Przemyśl ostatnie zdanie,to nie j.polski.
We often play (bez s) in soccer and play( bez s) at war. czasownik +s tylko w 3 osobie liczby pojedyńczej
i chyba I usually a nie usually I
(ławeczka zawieszona na sznurach) swing
(w postaci dźwigni dwustronnej) seesaw
bardzo wszystkim dziękuję
może być -There I have good time.
poprawa:
My favorite place is RURA.This is my playground.This place is in Wrocław.There are some swings, a sandbox and benches.I usually meet my friends there.We often play in soccer and play at war.I enjoy time I spend there very much.
..to play soccer, football, night baseball games. :)
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