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Dear Megan,

Great to hear from you! How did you spend your weekend? My was terrible! My friend Paweł invited me to voyage on the yacht together on Saturday morning. I’ve never really gone in for sailing. Besides I have seasickness. I disapproved of this idea so I refused him. He was infuriated, because he sponsored the whole trip. Paweł haven’t been in tauch with me by now  Evening faired highly promise. I went to the cinema, but the film was so dull, irritating and discouraging.
On Sunday in early morning I made a fuss with my mum about Holy Mass. She wanted to attend and go to church with me, but I dreamed only about sleeping. I covered my head with the pillow to not hear her. Then I felt upset. In the afternoon I could surf the Internet, because I hadn’t electricity. Later I resolved that I had to go to an Internet café to check my e- mails. Unfortunately my inbox was empty. By the way I wrote also to you

Say hi to Jack

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Przepisz to jeszcze raz i zastanów się, czy dobrze dałeś czasy i dobrze odmieniłeś czasowniki [szczególnie nieregularne].

"In the afternoon I could surf the Internet, because I hadn't electricity." - ???Popołudniu mogłaś serfować po necie, bo nie miałaś prądu??? - wtf?

Przepisz to jeszcze raz i popraw błędy z doborem właściwego czasu.

Piszesz w czasie past, a nagle: "Besides I HAVE seasickness." [wyróżnienie własne]

to miało być couldn't , zle napsialam. Zaprosił mnie na yacht a ze mam chorobe morska to mu odmowilam, o to mi chodziło, nie moze byc tak?