Prezentacja

Witam, proszę o sprawdzenie czy mniej więcej gramatycznie poprawnie napisałem swoją prezentację. Z góry dziękuję i pozdrawiam :)


Hello, my name is x x.
I would like present you our product, that is a carpet.
If you have any questions about our carpets, I answer after my presentation.

My presentation consists of three points
1. What we offer
2. Material
3. Type

As a leader in market, we are producing carpets that improve the health and comfort of your home.
We offer carpets in every shape, size, and style.
We have a carpets for every style and every budget.

Our carpets are made from the best wool, which gives strength and durability.

Our collection is the most miraculous works of modern art, both visually and incredibly soft underfoot.
Beautyfull patterns, colors, and a unique look.


Our carpets can change the feel of a room in an instant and look great, adding warmth to any style.

It is simple. Find a carpet your love. Bring it home. Lay it down.

Thank you very much for attention. Is there any questions?
no? so thank you.

Hello, my name is x x.
I would like (to) present you our product, that is a carpet.
If you have any questions about our carpets, I (will) answer after my
presentation.

My presentation consists of three points
1. What we offer
2. Material
3. Type

As a leader (on the) market, we (produce) carpets that improve the
health and comfort of your home (bardziej tutaj house niz home).
We offer carpets in every shape, size, and style.
We have carpets for every style and (for every budget).

Our carpets are made from the best wool which gives strength and
durability.

Our collection is the most miraculous works of modern art, both
visually and incredibly soft underfoot.
(Beautiful) patterns, colo(u)rs, and unique look.

Zmiany ktore musza nastapic podałem w nawiasie. Jakby jesczze ktos cos zlego zauwazyl to prosze mnie poprawic :)


Our carpets can change the feel of a room in an instant and look
great, adding warmth to any style.

It is simple. Find a carpet your love. Bring it home. Lay it down.

Thank you very much for attention. Is there any questions?
no? so thank you.

Oj kurcze, zapomnialem o kolejnej czesci, sorki :)

Our carpets can change (the atmosphere) of the room in an instant (o co tu chodzi?:D)and look
great, adding warmth to any style.

It is simple. Find a carpet your love. Bring it home. Lay it down.

Thank you very much for attention. (are) there any questions?
no? so thank you.

Jakos dziwnie to wszystko jest napisane, no ale chyba juz odbrze
Pozdrawiam

Dziękuję bardzo za szybką odpowiedź :)

Zmieniłem na:
Our carpets can change the atmosphere of the room, adding warmth to any style.

Pozdrawiam Callon :)

Oh, Callon... :)