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I started my holiday eariel than everyonel. I went with my brother to germany to visit my parents. It was holiday of my life. I spent nice time with my friends. We were fishing and swimming boat almost every day. We spent every weekends In centrum entertainment Hansa park I enjoy roller coster drivang with my the most screaming on the Word sister.
Every evening we were maiking barbecue party. In free time I help my father and earn a lot of monay. With my frends I was plaing golf and hunting ducks. It was lazy and crazy time that means this what tigers like the most.

>I started my holiday eariel than everyone ELSE.

I started my holiday earlier (!!)

I've gone with my brother to Germany to visit my parents.

It was the best holiday of my life.

swimming boat - (???) - moze sailing

We spent every weekends In one of entertainment centre- "Hansa park".

I enjoyed roller coaster driving (!!jeśli już; może bez driving) with my screaming sister.

making (!) barbecue

In free time I was helping my father and I' ve earned a lot of money (!)

I was playing (!!) golf

It was lazy and crazy time that what tigers like the most.

>I've gone with my brother to Germany to visit my parents.

I went było dobrze. Opisujemy przeszłość.


roller-coaster riding

barbecue się nie robi (make) po angielsku. Muszę zobaczyć co tam u góry pisze, bo nie pamiętam.

In my free time...

It was A lazy and.....and that is what tigers...

Every evening we had a barbecue party.