"What are a pros and cons of keepin fit ? "

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,, I'm too fat ! ". Is there anyone who didn't heard that from his partner or friend ?
Keeping fit is most common problem in 21th century. Everyone in these days want
to be as thin as a rack and have figure of a model. But what if living too healthy is
living unhealthy ?
To star with, the benefits of keeping fit cannot be denied. In addition, it let you
feel good in your body, which means that you become more self-confident and open to people.
Secondly, taining will cause good functioning of your organism. Systematical physical exercises
help strenght your muscles and bones. Finally, keeping fit let you have more energy and optimistical
attitude to life.
However, the most important drawback of systematical training is situation when you star live in
,,non-stop exercise". People become obsessed about they weight, which leads to sinny look, losing
concetration and tiredness.Another disadvantage of staying fit is cost of it. You must pay for
equipment, clothingc and club membership and they aren't cheap.
All in all, I think that keeping fit is good thing. All people should train but in racional amount.
Is there anyone who 'didn't' HAS NOT heard that from his partner or friend ?>Keeping fit is most 'common problem' (ale keeping fit to nie jest problem - to jest zajecie, i chyba chciales napisac 'zajecie') in THE 21th century. Everyone 'in' (niepotr) these days wantS (everyone to l. poj) to be as thin as a 'rack' tutaj RAKE (rack to cos innego-poszukaj) and have THE figure of a model. But what if living too healthILYy is living unhealthILYy ?
To 'star' (mysle, ze ortog, 'star' to cos innego) with, the benefits of keeping fit cannot be denied.(a one sa np jakie - kto to wie? mam sie domyslac?)
In addition, it letS (it-to 3os.l.poj) you feel good in your body, which means that you become more self-confident and open to people.
Secondly, 'taining' (ortog) will cause good functioning of your organism.
Systematical physical exercises help 'strenght' (zla czesc zdania) your muscles and bones. Finally, keeping fit letS you have more energy and 'optimistical' (zla czesc zdania) attitude to life.
However, the most important drawback of systematical training is
situation when you 'star' (orotog-popraw) TO live in A ,non-stop exercise" ROUTINE. People become obsessed about 'they' (zle slowo - tutaj THEIR weight, which leads to 'sinny' (ortog) look, losing 'concetration' (ortog) and tiredness. Another disadvantage of staying fit is THE cost of it. You must pay for equipment, 'clothingc' (nie slowo to CLOTHES) and club membership and they 'aren't' (prosze to napisac w calosci) cheap.
All in all, I think that keeping fit is A good thing. All people should
train but in 'racional' (nie za bardzo, moze inne slowo) amount.
Wow! Bardzo dziękuję ^^

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