Witam. Prosze o sprawdzenie opowiadania i poprawienia błędów. Zadanie pisane szybko, bo mam je już na jutro. Pisałam sama a pomysł wzięłam z innych zadań, które się już tutaj pojawiały. Dziękuję za pomoc :)
When the classroom door opened, everybody went silent.
To the classroom came Mr Brown.Everybody was very nervous because he was our new teacher and we had to write a test.
Moreover, we had heard many badly things about him.
Our new teacher had very serious expression and we were scared. While we were preparing to writing Mr Brown opened a journal and started to check attendances.
Suddenly, he stopped, looked at us and asked:
'Why are you so nervous?'
Nobody answered, so he backed to checking attendances.
The moment he finished a policeman came to the classroom.
'Your friend, Bobby had ecsaped from his home. Do you know anything about it?'- he asked.
Everyone died away. One of our classmate, Kris stood up and then excited with the police officer.The boy told him that Bobby has been recently very sad because older students had been laughing about him that he was a fat.
He didn't manage with it.
When Kris came back to the classroom he told us about Bobby's problems, too.
Mr Brown proposed walking besides of writing the test. While we were walking through a park we met Bobby. After long conversation he understood that he shouldn't worried. Thanks to our help Bobby came back home and what's more, our new teacher turned out a fantastic person.