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When I was child I liked so many places but I remember one special which I like best. It was my grandfather’s mansion called ‘’ Rose”. I love this place because it reminds me about the best events in my childhood and this is the most beautiful mansion I have ever seen.
Located in the picturesque and marvelous country near Warsaw, Rose is a well maintained, spacious, big, red brick Mansion, which was built in 1833. It has a 10 elegant rooms unlike other old mansions they are classic but comfortable. Mansion is surrounding by grand garden and swimming - pool.
This is the place special for a number of reasons . One of them is magical dining - room where me and my family celebrated important events. There are huge ,round, wooden table which was made in 1800 and a lot of stunning furniture Next to it there are spending bathroom with huge mirror and living room with stylish fireplace. In attic there are old library with thousands varied books. My grandfather’s mansion is set among oak trees and has a wonderful, huge garden with lots of flowers and fabulous , winding hedge. Behind Rose there is a modern swimming pool. I loved resting there when I was tired after school.
I have to admit I always returned to Rose with great pleasure because this is magic place. It reminds me about my gorgeous childhood. I love this place.
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