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Temat: Describle your flate/house/room.

I would like to describle budiling my of friend.This friend is rich. The budiling location on outskirts of the city. This bulding is a detached house. I was never in such a beautiful house. Detached house on about was enclosed with iron fence. Home entry was thourght the garden which was unvisible thourgh the hedge. When I came in was after the house was an impression very much modern with I was saw outside. Detached house was have floor. I was saw a big living room in which bilards were.From the conversation with him I learnt that five bathrooms, twelve rooms and two kitchens. He was has aslo serving women. The house has very nice colours of walls fitting equipments completely. The equpiment looks expensive. Very much I like detached house and I future I would like to have aslo a home ofe one's own but smaller and more modest

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I would like to describle 'budiling' (ortog) my of friend, (tutaj mozesz napisac...my friend's building).
The 'budiling' (ortog) IS 'location' (zla czesc zdania, tutaj LOCATED on THE outskirts of the city. This 'bulding' (ortog) is a detached house. I 'was' HAD NEVER BEEN 'never' (niepotr) in such a beautiful house. Detached house
'on about' (tego nie rozumiem tutaj) 'was' IS enclosed with AN iron fence. Home entry 'was' IS 'thourght' (ortog) the garden which 'was' IS 'unvisible' (ortog) 'thourgh' (ortog) the hedge. When I came in 'was after' (nie rozumiem tego) the house IT GAVE 'was' (niepotr) an impression OF BEING very 'much' (niepotr) modern with THAT WHICH I 'was' (niepotr, nie mozesz miec 2 czasowniki obok siebie tak jak tutaj) saw outside.
Detached house 'was have floor' (tego nie rozumiem). I 'was' (ale po co to 'was' co ono tutaj daje?) saw a big living room in which THERE WERE 'bilards' (ortog) 'were' (to nie lacina, nie dajemy czasownikow na koncu). From the conversation with him I learnt that IT HAS five bathrooms, twelve rooms and two kitchens. He 'was' (chyba zakochales sie w tym 'was'; tutaj akurat niepotr) has 'aslo' (ortog) 'serving women' (to nie Staroswietni Rzym, napisz 'servants'). The house has very nice colours 'of' ON THE walls 'fitting equipments completely' (tego nie rozumiem). The 'equpiment' (ortog) looks VERY expensive. 'Very much I like detached house' (nie, nie tak, calkowicie zla kol slow...I liked the detached house very much) and IN THE 'I'(niepotr) future I would like to ALSO have 'aslo' (a co niby to 'aslo' jest?) a home 'ofe' (ortog) 'one's' (zle uzycie slowa, tutaj napisz MY) own but smaller and more modest.