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Dear Ms Smith,


I am writing to apply the Hotel Receptionist position which was advertised on jobisjob.co.uk. I believe that I fulfil your requirements and what is even more important, the job you offer seems to be interesting. At the same time I will be glad if you could find a moment yourself acquainted with the details of my qualifications.

In the beginning I would like to point out that I have already gained some relevant work experience as a secretary in Driving School. I was able to cope well in direct with customers.
I have advanced user of MS Word, Excell and PowerPoint. I speak fluent English and I can read Russian and German. I believe that these skills may be very useful at this position.

I would like to add, that as far as my personal competences concerned, I am honest, responsible, hard working and conscientious person. I am young person and I am looking for an opportunity to gain new skills and experience working abroad.

I strongly believe that I am suitable choice and may become a part of your team. I am available for the interview and can be reached at +48 xxx xxx xxx. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.


Yours sincerely,

zapomniałam dopisać a nie wiem jak się edytuje post więc wkleje jeszcze raz....


Dear Ms Smith,


I am writing to apply the xxxxxxxxxx position which was
advertised on jobisjob.co.uk. I believe that I fulfil your
requirements and what is even more important, the job you offer seems
to be interesting. At the same time I will be glad if you could find a
moment yourself acquainted with the details of my qualifications.

In the beginning I would like to point out that I have already gained
some relevant work experience as a secretary in Driving School. I am able to cope well in direct with customers.
I have advanced user of MS Word, Excell and PowerPoint. I speak fluent
English and I can read Russian and German. I believe that these skills
may be very useful at this position.

I would like to add, that as far as my personal competences concerned,
I am honest, responsible, hard working and conscientious person. I am
young person and I am looking for an opportunity to gain new skills
and experience working abroad. I am well organized and communicative and believe that an opportunity of working for your company would be a great personal challenge.

I strongly believe that I am suitable choice and may become a part of
your team. I am available for the interview and can be reached at +48
xxx xxx xxx. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.


Yours sincerely

I am writing to apply FOR the xxxxxxxxxx position which was
advertised on jobisjob.co.uk. I believe that I fulfil your
requirements and what is even more important, the job you offer seems
to be interesting??? (interesting opinion/attitude to be sharing with a potential employer....zastanow sie jeszcze raz). I will be (zly czas) glad (wymysl sobie lepsze slowo) if you could find a
moment [yourself TO acquaint...kol slow] with the details of my qualifications.

I would like to point out that I have already gained
some relevant work experience as a secretary in THE {wstaw nazwe, zeby bylo proper noun] Driving School. I am able to (cope...lepiej interact) well with customers.
I have (zly czasownik) AN advanced user of MS Word, Excell and PowerPoint. I speak fluent
English and I can ALSO read Russian and German. I believe that these skills
may be very useful

Dziękuję za poprawki. Wklejam wersję poprawiona, tak żeby wszystko było już ok.

Dear Ms Smith,


I am writing to apply for the Hotel Receptionist position which was advertised on jobcentreplus.gov.uk I am forwarding my curriculum vitae. *

Firstly I would like to point out that I have already gained some relevant work experience as a secretary in the LOK** . I was able to interact well with customers.
I am an advanced user of MS Word, Excell and PowerPoint. I speak fluent English and I can also read of Russian and German. I believe that these skills may be very useful on this position.

I would like to add, that as far as my personal competences are concerned, I am an honest, responsible, hard working and conscientious person who is looking for an opportunity to gain new skills and experience working abroad. I well organized, possess excellent communications skills and believe that the opportunity of working abroad for your company would be a great personal challenge.

I strongly believe that I am suitable candidate and would be very much like to become a part of your team. I am available for the interview and can be reached since December of 1 at +48 xxx xxx xxx. I thank you for your consideration and look forward to hearing from you soon.


* mogłabym to wyrzucic? czy warto pisac takie cos ująć w liscie motywacyjnym? Podobne zdanie jest na koncu listu...

**LOK nie jest znana w UK, wiec niewiem czy warto to pisać. No chyba że wyrzucę nazwe i zakończę na "as a secretary"?
Jakies sugestie dotyczące moich dylematów? :)