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PROFESIONAL POSITIONS
A large number of students , about 65 percent, stated that they intended to follow profesional careers.13 percent want be an actors .22 percent to tie their future with biology as doctors or ecologists. 10 percent would like be a dancers.15 percent to tie their future with laws. They stated that want be a judges,lawyers or public prosecutor. 5 percent dream about careerssportsmen.2 perent want be a teachers. Other would like leave POland and go on a university in the USA. Nearly all pupils in this category seemed to be aware of the need for a iniversity degree.
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'PROFESIONAL' (ortog - nie za dobry start) POSITIONS

A large number of students , about '65 percent' (mozesz napisac 65%), stated that they intended to follow 'profesional' (ortog) careers. (nie zaczynamy zdania tak, musisz cos dodac...OUT OF WHICH 13 'percent' (jak juz chcesz pisac per cent - to sa 2 slowa) want be 'an actors' (nie, pomieszalas sobie...want TO BE ACTORS, przed l.mn nie dajemy 'a', a 'actors' to l.mn), 22 percent 'to' (niepotr) (tutaj potrzeba WANT TO) tie their future with biology as doctors or ecologists.
10 percent would like be ''a' dancers' (przed l. mnoga nie dajemy 'a').15 percent 'to' (niepotr) tie their future with 'laws' (jakie to 'laws'- to nic nie znaczy...tutaj napisz...with THE LEGAL profession). They stated that THEYT want be 'a judges' (znowu to samo, zapamietaj, przed l. mnoga nie dajemy 'a')lawyers or public prosecutorS.
5 percent dream about THE career OF BEING sportsmen 2 'perent' (ortog, pisz %) want be 'a teachers' (znowu to samo, przed l. mnoga nie dajemy 'a').
'Other' (tutaj albo 'other students' albo OTHERS) would like TO leave Poland and go onTO a university in the USA.
Nearly all THE pupils in this category seemed to be aware of the need for
a 'iniversity' (ortog) degree.