tekst o zakupach i reklamie

Mam napisać tekst (zdecydowanie nie rozprawkę) o zakupach, rodzajach sklepów, powodach, dla których robimy zakupy oraz reklamie.
Prosiłabym o zaznaczenie błędów i wytłumaczenie dlaczego tak, a nie inaczej.

There are loads of kinds of shops, but more often than not we do shopping at the grocer's, greengrocer's, clothesshops, bookshops, chemist's but also in the Netshops that offer us many diverse goods we can find in one spot.
Most people don't like shopping because they connect it with spending an hours in shops wondering which product is better for them.
Nowadays shopping through the Internet mediation is becoming more and more common. It is definetely easier and more comfortable way of doing shopping and a selection of products is much bigger. Besides, we don't even need to clothe and go out to buy what we want so we're saving our valuable time.
The goods bought via the Internet are often cheaper but unfortunately at the cost of quality. Additionally, in the Internet we may come across some crook who wants to palm us off faulty items or things we didn't order. (nie wiem, czy palm off jest poprawne, chodziło mi o 'wciskanie' rzeczy, ktorych nie chcieliśmy).
The reasons we do shopping for are different. Adults usually do it just because they must or they need something, while teens do shopping mainly for their pleasure.

What are the functions of advertisements? The fist one to mention is to inform. A lot of information people have from the advertisements they read. Advertisements introduce them to new products or remind them of the existing ones.
The second function is to sell. The products are shown from the best point of view. Often even cigarettes or alcohol are associated with the good values of human life such as joy, love and happiness.
The aim of a good advertisement is to convince a potential client to buy the advertised product or service.
Every producer tries to draw our attention to his product. They apply every methods, among other things: hire purchase, discounts, sales, possibility to pay for a product or service in a later time-limit in order to encourage us to buy their goods.


Z góry dziękuje.

There are kinds of shops, but more often than not we do OUR shopping at the grocer's, greengrocer's, clothes shops, bookshops, chemist's (staromodne slowo...moze drugstore) but also in Netshops that offer us many diverse goods THAT can BE fOUnd in one spot.
Most people don't like shopping because they connect it with spending hours in shops wondering which product is better for them.
Nowadays, shopping through the Internet is becoming more and more common. It is definetely (orto) AN easier and more comfortable way of shopping and THE selection of products is much bigger. Besides, we don't even need to and go out to buy what we want, so we're saving our valuable time.
The goods bought via the Internet are often cheaper but unfortunately at the cost of quality. Additionally, in the Internet we may come across some crook who wants to palm off faulty items ON US or things we didn't order.

The reasons we shop are different FOR...( dokoncz zdanie). Adults usually do it just because they must or they need something, while teens shop mainly for (their..nie potr) pleasure.

What functions DO advertisements SERVE? The fiRst one to mention is to inform (kogo? ). [A lot of information people have from the advertisements they read...po pracuj nad tym zdanie troche wiecej..Zacznij zdanie z "People"] Advertisements introduce them to new products or remind them of existing ones.
The second function is to sell (czego? products?). The products are shown from the best point of view. Often, even cigarettes or alcohol are associated with the good values of human life such as joy, love and happiness.
The aim of a good advertisement is to convince a potential client to buy the advertised product or service.
Every producer tries to draw our attention to his product. They apply every (l. poj. czy mnoga) methods (l. poj czy mn?), among other things: hire?? purchase, discounts, sales, the possibility to pay for a product or service AT A later time in order to encourage us to buy their goods NOW.

"lots of" instead of "loads of"?
"dress" instead of "clothe"?

the reasons (...) are different for grown-ups and teenagers.

People get many information from advertisements which they read- chyba, że chodziło o rozbudowanie tego zdania, podanie jakiegoś przykładu itd.

hire purchase- w 2 słownikach jakie posiadam, jest to kupno na raty, w słownikach internetowych też, coś jest z tym nie tak?

"lots of" instead of "loads of"? ..wole "many"
"dress" instead of "clothe"? ok

the reasons (...) are different for grown-ups and teenagers. ok

People get A LOT OF (bylo dobrze czemu zmeniles na ) information from THE (bylo dobrze, czemu usuneles "the")advertisements which they read. Dobrze jest, ale zawsze mozesz dodac przyklad :)

hire purchase- w 2 słownikach jakie posiadam, jest to kupno na raty,
hire purchase n. Chiefly British Purchase of a commodity on an installment plan.
sorki, nie znam takie cos, u nas (AmE) sie innaczej nazywa :)

"the" zjadłam przez czysty przypadek.

dzięki za pomoc :)

(do zdania o informacjach z reklam):
for example; we would never know anything about new mobile phones and their amazing functions such as e-mail, navigation, instant messanger, reading e-books and so on, if we didn't read it in the newspaper or in some leaflet.



zapomniałam wcześniej dodać;
They apply all possible methods (...)