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Hi Alice,
how are things? I have a fantastic book that I want to recommend to you. It is called 'Twillight' and it was written by Stephanie Mayer. It is romantic fiction story set in Forks. The main character is Bella.

Isabella Swan go to Forks and live with her father- Charlie. She meet good-looking and briliant boy- Edward. The ecquaintance Bella's and Edward's become sensual and alight romance. Edward and his family prove a ... vampires! I won't give the ending away in case you decide to read in yourself.

The author has created an amazing romatic world. The story is gripping, moving and not boring! I identified with Bella.
There are lots of suprieses and I really wanted to know was going to happend.
Have you read any good books recently?

Kiss,
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Isabella Swan 'go' (ale Isabella to 3os.l.poj 'she' prosze dostosowac czasownik do 3os.l.poj) to Forks and 'live' (prosze dostosowac czasownik) with her father- Charlie. 'She meet' (ale przeciez 'she' to 3os.l.poj-prosze dostosowac czasownik do 3os.l.poj) A good-looking and briliant boy- Edward. The 'ecquaintance' (ortog) OF Bella's and Edward's (ale tu brakuje rzeczownika)become sensual and alight A romance. Edward and his family prove TO BE 'a' (dlaczego dajesz 'a' przed l. mnoga?) ... vampires! I won't give the ending away in case you decide to read 'in' (zle slowo-popraw) yourself.
There are lots of suprieses and I really wanted to know WHAT was going to
'happend' (ortog-popraw).
KissES,

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