Pytanie o drogę

Czy mógłby ktoś sprawdzić mi ten dialog? Będę bardzo wdzięczna:)

- Excuse me, I want to get to Borgo Trento. Could you help me? Is it far?
- No, it’s only about fifteen minutes’ walk. Go to the end of the street and then turn right into Cangrande street. Go as far as you see the roundabout. Take the first exit left. Go to the end of the street and turn left. Go over the bridge. Borgo Trento is on your right just after the theatre. You can't miss it!
- Thank you.
- No problem.

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Weronika

- Excuse me, I want to get to Borgo Trento. Could you help me? Is it far?
- No, it's only about five minutes from here. AT the end of THIS street turn right ON Cangrande street. Go as far as the roundabout AND take the first exit left. PROCEED TO the end of the street and turn left again. Go over the bridge. Borgo Trento is on your right just NEXT TO the theatre. You can't miss it!
- Thank you.
- No problem.

Usunalem 'fifteen minute walk' because you are clearly giving DRIVING directions. Wstawilem PROCEED zeby nie powtarzac go, go, go...
Moga byc rowniez inne wersje.

Bardzo dziękuję!
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