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I think that money are very important in our live because we are able to buy things which we want to buy. For money we can buy things which we are using in daily life such us food, clothes which help us to live and also things such as cars, tv, computers which makes out life easier. If we have lots of money our life is much easier and better. If we want to have money we have to work so its reason why a more people dont have enough money and on the world is poverty. we can say to invited the money is not good, but without it ours live would be difficult. money its not only important for reach people. everybody need it, for example to go to shop , to a hospital. we need pay for live. if some one want to have the money must hard work. so i thnih ro money are very important- sometimes it good sometimes bad., but every one want to be reach and live as lord so have to work.

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