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I spent the first week of winter holidays at home. In the mornings I read books and played a computer. In the afternoons I and my friends skated on ice and we went on pizza. We was in the cinema. There was much laugh. In the evenings I met with my boyfriend. We listened to music and watched tv. The second week I spent with my grandparents. Time went by very fast.

I spent the first week of MY winter holidays at home. In the mornings I
read books and played ON a computer. In the afternoons I and my friends
'skated on ice' (lepiej...went iceskating) and we went 'on' (to jest klalka z polskiego 'na', ale w jez. ang tak nie piszemy, idziesz gdzies 'po cos' FOR) A pizza. 'We was' (tego Ci nie poprawie, ale to jest bledem, dlaczego mieszasz l. mnoga 'we' z l. poj.' was' - czy tak teraz was ucza?)(ale 'was' czy l. mnoga tego, jest i tak zlym slowem, napisze WENT-poszlismy) 'in' TO the cinema. There was much 'laugh' (to jest zle slowo, tutaj ma byc LAUGHTER.
Time went by very 'fast' QUICKLY.(posluchaj pare ang piosenek, gdzie spiewaja jak szybko czas leci)