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"HOW CAN WE REDUCE AIR POLLUTION LEVELS IN OUR CITIES?" Bardzo zależy mi zależy..
Udało mi się ją napisać, ale podejrzewam, że są w niej małe błędy.. Jeśli nie większe:( Liczę na pomoc i z góry serdecznie dziękuję!!;)
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Have we influence on air pollution levels in our cities? One person surely not, but greater their quantity surely. On air pollution levels influence has many factors, which in most we cause.

Firstly, in the city centre reign too much traffic. The cars are one from source air pollution. Use public transport instead of cars! How many times did you ask your parents to drive you somewhere? You can go by bike or walk. You will get fit and you can be sure that you don't produce fumes. It cause fewer cars in the city center.

Another solution is introduce a recycling scheme. Too much rubbish being burned. It produces fumes! Many materials can by used many times. Segregate rubbish is very important in our lives. Thank to recycling - less rubbish being burned.

Finally, the situation air could be improved if create many green places. Park reduce air pollution. City need lungs, therefore plant trees!

In conclusion, there are many ways by reduce air pollution levels in our cities. In will influence not only on city, but on all world. As Carl Jung (Swiss psychologist) said: “The only thing we have to fear on this planet is man."

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