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Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing in connection with the job advertisement which I saw in the "Sports shop" on Krupowki street.I would like to apply for a teaching of sport and recreation.
I am twenty two years old and I am technical school student.I am very creative person and I have deep knowledge and experience in the field of sport and dietetics.I think I am suitable for this job becouse I am resposible and ambitious person.I am always happy and do not have problem with communication with people.
If you are interested please contact me. My phone number is ..... I can start my work at any time.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully,

XYZ

Zadanie z angielskiego > Może ktoś sprawdzić i poprawić błędy z góry dziękuje.

Proszę niech ktoś sprawdzi jutro muszę to oddać a jest już puzno...

I would like to apply for a teaching TO NIE JEST NAZWA STANOWISKA of sport and recreation.
I am twenty two years old and I am PRZEDIMEK technical school student.I am PRZEDIMEK very creative person and I have deep knowledge and experience in the field of sport and DIETARY SCIENCE.I think I am suitable for this job becouse

resposible (orto)

No any 'attention-grabbing elements'?
You haven't learnt that flattery gets you everywhere, have you ;-)

Something like : I'd like you to know I've taken some time to research on your company and I'm really impressed.

The above is directed at the asker of course.

Why? I love flattery
(batting eyelashes)

But you wouldn'y say ?, " I'm sorry ,I’m being very naughty —I’ve ordered champagne!"

La Veuve Cliquot is a personal favourite.
Blame it on my French born mother-in-law

I used to slurp Don Perignon in those rare moments of "catering aberrations" so to speak. :)

ah yes, "shrinkage". I know it well...you think you're the only one who ever worked the bar?

No, of course not. By the way, the Cliquot has an orange label, rememeber ?