ulubiony dzień - sprawdzenie

Saturday is my favourite day of the week, because I can finally rest and a weekend is beginning.
I usually wake up around 10.00. First thing what I do is eating breakfast. After breakfast I go for a walking or go to my cousine. With her I go shopping or we and our friends go to billiards, where is really great fun!
When I get home, my mother makes lunch. After lunch I go making my homework or
reading book.
In the evening is time for dinner. Sometimes it must be really big dinner, because we often invite familly. Sometimes we eat at the grandmother's home, but when is warm we eat outside. After dinner I play of computer or go to my friend. I always come back very late, because I don't must get up on Sundays morning.


To ma być praca w najprostszej formie jaka tylko może być ;D - poziom początkująco-zaawansowany. :D
Proszę o sprawdzenie :D

Saturday is my favourite day of the week, because I can finally rest
and 'a' THE weekend is beginning.
I usually wake up around 10.00 a.m. First thing 'what' THAT I do is 'eating' EAT
breakfast. After breakfast I go for a 'walking' WALK (albo I go walking) or go to my cousine.
With her I go shopping or we and our friends go to PLAY billiards, where THERE is really great fun!
After lunch I go 'making' (kalka z polskiego' robic' tutaj daj AND DO) my
homework or 'reading' READ A book.
In the evening IT is time for dinner. Sometimes it must be really big
dinner, because we often invite THE familly. Sometimes we eat at 'the' MY
grandmother's home, but when IT is warm we eat outside. After dinner I
play 'of' ON computer or go to my friend. I always come back very late,
because I don't 'must' HAVE TO get up on Sundays morning.

Dziękuuuję bardzo za sprawdzenie! ;**

dopiero zauwazylam:
'cousine' - nie, ma byc COUSIN (niema znaczenia czy kobieta czy mezczyzna).

Uhm, ok. Teraz będę wiedzieć. ^^
Dzięki. ;)