Opowidanie o ostatniej imprezie

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Bardzo proszę o w miarę szybkie sprawdzenie i poprawienie tego co napisałam, a napisać miałam opowiadanie o mojej ostatniej imprezie, tzn. miałam kilka pytań i musiałam na nie odpowiedzieć.
Proszę o pomoc :)


I like going to parties. At the party I can meet new people. I like giving parties. I sometimes invite my friends to my home.
Last time I was to a birthday party. My friend celebrated her seventeen birthday. At that party I spent a nice time and I didn't have any problems.
At party I was dressed a skirt and a top. Music at party was different. We were listening the music of R&B, disco and other.
I like dancing. At party I met new friends: Iza, Gosia and Mateusz. I ate a pizza, sandwiches and a snacks. . I drank the juice and cold drinks.
At party I was at the end and I helped her clean up.
Hmm sprawdzi ktoś ?
Pewnie się boją :)

>At the party I can meet new people.
At A party...

>I like giving parties.
dodaj also: I also like...

>Last time I was to a birthday party.
Recently, I was AT a....
albo Recently, I attended a birthday party.

>My friend celebrated her seventeen birthday.
seventeenth

>At that party I spent a nice time and I didn't have any problems.
...I HAD a nice time


>At party I was dressed a skirt and a top.
I was wearing a skirt and a top (to może opisz ten top?)

Music at party was different.
The music at my friend's party was different.

>We were listening the music of R&B, disco and other.
...listenting TO R&B

>At party I met new friends: Iza, Gosia and Mateusz.
At that party, I met....

>I ate a pizza, sandwiches and a snacks. .
bez "a"

>I drank the juice and cold drinks.
bez "the"

>At party I was at the end and I helped her clean up.
At the end of the party, I helped my friend to clean up.
Wcale się nie dziwie, bo błędów jest sporo ;) ;p

Dziękuje bardzo za pomoc! ;))

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