My vision of ideal world in the future

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In the future the world will develop very rapidly. The people lifes will change beyond recognition. We will driving in the flying cars, the houswork will be do automatically, so we won't do it on our own.
Our beauty won't fade. We will live longer, but not always. Cover a thousand kilometers will take only couple of minutes. The students won't have to carry books, which are very heavy. The lessons in school won't be longer then 6 hours a day.
Everybody will talk one language, so the communicate will be easier. Countries won't be at war with each others. Everyone will be friendly. In this world won't be hunger, envy, hate, angry, violence, aggresion and all negative emotions.
It can be a ideal world, but I think it never will be perfect for everyone.
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The 'people' (albo to tlumaczylas slowo w slowo z polskiego, albo po prostu nie wiesz. Tutaj jest potr. dopeln. 'people's) 'lifes' (tak nie wyglada l. mn rzecz. 'life') will change beyond recognition. We will (tu cos brakuje) driving 'in' (nie rozumiem dlaczego to slowo uzylas) 'the'(niepotr) flying cars,
the houswork will 'be do' (zle, pomysl co piszesz) automatically, so we won't do it 'on our own' (niew, to znaczy calkowicie cos innego, pomysl).
'Our beauty won't fade' (z zeby tylko, z co z tymi ktorzy nie sa 'beautiful?). We will live longer, but not always SO. (tu cos brakuje) cover a thousand kilometers will 'take only' (zla kol slow) (tu cos brakuje) couple of minutes. The lessons in (tu cos brakuje) school won't be longer 'then' (zle slowo) 6 hours a day.
Everybody will talk one language, so 'the' (niepotr) 'communicate' (zla czesc mowy) will be easier.
In this world THERE won't be (tu cos brakuje) hunger, envy, hate, 'angry' (zla czesc mowy), violence, 'aggresion' (ortog) and all (tu cos brakuje) negative emotions.
It 'can' (tutaj pasuje slowo 'would) be aN ideal world, but I think it never will be perfect for everyone.
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