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my name is Ania and i am writing on a school trip to London secondary school students with Kraków. i am writing to ask you for your help in finding affordable accommodation for 30 persons within a period of 15-24 August. whether it could host the state sightseeing company in London with a guide?
we would like to visit the buckingham palace,Tate Britain, St Paul’s Cathedral
we would be interested to see the city and the famous British Museum
Please send as soon as the cost of trips, it is very important to me.
i look forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully
XYZ

jak napiszesz to po polsku, to bedzie latwiej wykumac o co dokladnie w tym liscie chodzi. I wtedy mozna poprawiac.

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