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Dear Madam/Sir (jak się zwrócić do agencji ?)
I'am writting in connection with enquire about flat.I found advert in the newspapers two days ago and I would be interested in having more details about small flat on Oxfrod's street.

I wonder if you could possibly tell me what is the distance from means of transport and stores?

I would me grateful if you could tell me about equipment.Could you please send me further details about household appliances in kitchen?Is there any cooker or fridge?

I would ask about places to practice sport.Are there any places to do for example jog?
Moreover I would like to know if is there access to cultural entertainment?

I would be very grateful if You could /would reply as soon as possible.


Yours faithfully.
XYZ


PROSZĘ UPRZEJMIE o sprawdzenie, ewentualnie dodanie czegoś. Pozdrawiam! :)

Dear 'Madam/Sir' (jest przyjete, ze zawsze piszemy Sir/Madam) (tak, to jest ok do agencji)
'I'am' (nie. Albo 'I AM' albo 'I'M'- ale w powaznych listach to piszemy w calosci tzn 'I am) 'writting' (ortog) in connection with AN enquirY 'about' REGARDING A flat. I found THE (prosze pamietac o przedimkach 'a', 'the'-bez tego zdania sa niegram) advert in the (tutaj napisz nazwe tego newspaper) newspapers two days ago and I would be interested in having more
details about THE small flat 'on' (tutaj daj numer tego flatu np. 15 'Oxfrod's' OXFORD Street.
I wonder if you could possibly tell me what is the distance from THE means
of transport and AN APPROXIMATE THE DISTANCE TO THE NEAREST sHOPS?
I would 'me' BE grateful if you could tell me about THE 'equipment' (nie jestem pewna co masz na mysli). (generalnie mowimy 'fixtures and fittings')
Could you please send me further details about ALL THE household appliances in
THE kitchen? Is there 'any' A cooker or A fridge? (to akurat jest przyjete, ale mozna sie zapytac, czy to jest na 'gas' albo na 'electric'-bo to niekiedy jest wazne) (Tez mozna zapytac sie o 'dishwasher', microwave...)
I would ALSO LIKE TO ask YOU about NEARBY places to practice sport. Are there any places to GO 'do for example' (niepotr) jogGING?
Moreover I would like to know if is there IS AN access to ANY cultural
entertainment?
I would be very grateful if 'You' (you piszemy mala litera w srodku zdania) would reply as soon as possible.