proszę o sprawdzenie :)

Proszę o pomoc! a mianowicie sprawdzenie mojej pracy(myślę, że jest w niej dużo błędów)

Dear Maria,

How are you? thanks for your recent letter. I'm sorry I haven't written for so long but I go on a trip. I'm in London and I stay one month.In London I learn English and I take participate in cours swimming. I find informaction in newspaper. I meet nwe friends. They are very friendly. There are African, French, Spanish, Brazil and Polish. I meet Tania. She is Brazilian., she lives in Rio de Janeiro. She is crazy, nice and very inteligent. She's sixteen years old. She has black hair, grey eye and she's tall. I like her very much. I think this camp is very interesting we can meet nwe friends, learn swimm and English. I send fhoto.
Give me love for parents.
Write soon
XYZ

z góry serdecznie dziękuje :)

How are you? thanks for your recent letter. I'm sorry I haven't written for so long but I go on a trip. I'm in London and, I will stay here one month. In London I learn English and I take participate in swimming course. I found information about this course in newspaper. I met new friends. They are very friendly. They are African, French, Spanish, Brazil and Polish. I met Tania. She is Brazilian. she lives in Rio de Janeiro. She is crazy, nice and very inteligent. She's sixteen. She has black hair, grey eye and she's tall. I like her very much. I think this camp is very interesting we can meet new friends, learn swimming and English. I will send photo to you.



Ja znalazłam troszkę błędów i co umiałam to poprawiłam, ale bardzo prawdopodobne że nadal nie jest idealnie:P

dziękuje bardzo :)

but I went on a trip...
I learn English and I participate in ...
grey eyes...
learn swimming...