bardzo proszę o sprawdzenie

Nie jestem pewna kilku zdań i bardzo proszę o sprawdzenie poprawności. Z góry serdecznie dziękuję

I miss summer every day
and remember all details
I could sunbathe all the time
and with my friends have fun
There was many places to visiting
and a lot of new people to meeting
I had a do from morning until night
for summer loves it was the best time
But I won’t tell you anything concrete
Because I keep it in my memory
I will recollect this time in bad days
I hope next summer will be also great

I miss summer every day
and remember all details
I could sunbathe all the time
and with my friends have fun - rozumiem, ze mial byc rym: szyk wyrazow nie gra z tym, chociaz w takim wierszyku udzie ci to na suchu.
There WERE (no bo placeS) many places to VISIT
and a lot of new people to MEET
I PARTIED do from morning until night
for summer loves

and remember all (tu cos brakuje) details
I PARTIED do from morning 'until' (lepiej pasuje 'till') night

and remember all details - ale to zdanie ma rytm.

(skreslic 'do' po PARTIED, nie zauwazylem)

dziękuję :)