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The reading passage is mostly about creating the biggest worldwide social network, it also says how facebook works in society. Moreover it's about money, that is providing by this page.

Mostly the article mentions USA locations where facebook was made. It also talks about countvies where this page banned for inproper content. You can also read about found, but it is only other notice.

The main idea of paragraph one is to show creating of facebook, it also tell us about the creator of this page.

The main idea of paragraph two is to present the Benefits like ease of communication.

The main idea of paragraph three is to how monez facebook evns, it tell also that, this page is one of the most uauable internet companies.


The main idea of paragraph four is to introduce countries where facebook is banned bz government.

I always profile staff to view students.
I expand my PC with new DIMM.
Coach order double change.
I must notify my mother about new bill.
Iupdate my profile on facebook.
I maintain good relation ship with my freinds.
Growing demand is good for salleus.

Learning it's a big advantage to my future.

I fail my exam on the list attempt.

I must found new nobby, this at is boring.

"reading passage" ??
"Moreover it's about money, that is providing by this page." - nie rozumiem sensu tego zdania, komu FB dostarcza kasy? chyba nie czytelnikowi… w ogóle "providing" chyba nie do tego zdania

"Mostly the article mentions USA locations where facebook was made." - chyba FB był stworzony tylko w 1 lokalizacji. Może tak: "The article mentions various US locations, the country where FB was made" ?

"It also talks about countvies where this page banned for inproper content. " - ja bym użyła formy biernej "is/was banned".

"You can also read about found, but it is only other notice." chyba brakuje mi kontekstu, bo nie rozumiem.

The main idea of paragraph one is to show creating of facebook, it also tell us about the creator of this page. - pierwsza część zdania niezrozumiała "to show creating of facebook" ? , druga OK.

The main idea of paragraph two is to present the Benefits like ease of communication. - OK (chyba bez "the").

The main idea of paragraph three is to how monez facebook evns, it tell also that, this page is one of the most uauable internet companies. - najpierw popraw palcówki, za dużo ich.

The main idea of paragraph four is to introduce countries where facebook is banned bz government. - nie znam paragrafu ale chyba powinno być "present not introduce"

I always profile staff to view students. - nie rozumiem

I expand my PC with new DIMM - niech ktoś inny się wypowie, można też użyć "upgrade"

Coach order double change. - ok.

I must notify my mother about new bill. - Zbyt oficjalnie dla mnie, "tell her"

I update my profile on facebook. Zły czas

Growing demand is good for - "sale".

Learning it's a big advantage to my future. - Chyba ok.

I fail my exam on the list attempt. ???
I must found new nobby, this at is boring. ???