Dwie prace - sprawdzenie bladow...

Prosze o poprawieni bledow.

Pierwsza. My best friend.

My best friend is Daniel. He's sixteen years old. Daniel lives in ...., and learns in High School in .... He is very tall and slim. He has short black hair and brown eyes. Daniel in very friendly and ambitious. He has a good heart and he's very sensitice to problems of other people. He likes play football and play computer hames. He is a very good swimmer.
That's all about my best friend.

Druga, niedokonczona. My favourite hero.

My favourite hero is Spiderman. He's real name is Peter Parker. He's tall and slim young man. He has dark hair and brown eyes.
Peter's parents died when he was six years old. He was left in the care of his Uncle Ben and Aunt May. In HighSchool he was bitten by a radioactive spider and got power.
I tutaj nie ma konca, niestety z moim angielskim nie daje rady skleic taiego zdania:
Poczatkowo Peter uzywal swej mocy do zarabiania pieniedzy walczac na arenie, ale po zabojstwie jego wujka postanowil wykorzystac swoja sile do walki ze zlem.
najlepiej gdyby bylo to napisane w prostym jezyku, bo jak widac nie prezentuje wysokiego poziomu. Zdanie/zdania moze brzmiec troche inaczej, wazna jest informacja. Zamias walki ze zlem moze byc powstanowil uzywac silydo pomagania ludziom. Cos wymyslicie mam nadzieje i oczywisice sprawdzicie obie prace.
Bede niezmiernie wdzieczny :). Zalezy mi na czasie. Macie jakas godzinke ;). Dacie rade.
Jak cos moje [gg] .

Pozdrawiam i licze na was.

sprawdzenie bładów (jak w temacie)rnwielbłądów...

and learns in High School in .... -> and goes to high school in ....

Daniel in very friendly and ambitious. -> Daniel IS very (...)

he's very sensitice to problems of other people. -> (...) sensitiVe to other people's problems

He likes play football and play computer hames. -> He likes playING football and (bez powtarzania czasownika) computer Games.

He's real name is Peter Parker. -> HIS real name (...)

He's tall and slim young man. -> He's A tall and slim young man.

In HighSchool he was bitten by a radioactive spider and got power. -> (zmieniłabym na) In high school he was bitten (...) and as a result received/ acquired some special power(s).

Poczatkowo Peter uzywal swej mocy do zarabiania pieniedzy walczac na arenie, ale po zabojstwie jego wujka postanowil wykorzystac swoja sile do walki ze zlem. -> At first Peter used his power to earn money as a wrestler (zapaśnik), but after his uncle was killed (murdered) he decided to use his strength to fight evil (pomagania ludziom: to help people).

To tyle ode mnie. ;)

No i super. Wielkie dzieki. Wiekszosc bledow, ktore wymieniles to zwykle literowki ;)
Ale za te ostatnie zdanie jestem niezmiernie wdzieczny. Jestem twoim dluznikiem.
Pozdrawiam i jeszcze raz dziekuje.

Czasami własne literówki najtrudniej zauważyć, dlatego korekta się przydaje. Btw: wymieniles -> wymieniłAś ;)
A poza tym to nie ma sprawy. :)

My best friend is Daniel. He's sixteen years old. Daniel lives in
...., and learns in High School in .... He is very tall and slim. He
has short black hair and brown eyes. Daniel in very friendly and
ambitious. He has a good heart and he's very sensitIVE to problems of
other people. He likes playING football and playING computer games. He is a
very good swimmer.
That's all about my best friend.

My favourite hero is Spiderman. HIS real name is Peter Parker. He's
young, tall and slim. He has dark hair and brown eyes. Peter's parents died when he was six years old. He was left in the care of his Uncle Ben and HIS Aunt May. In High School he was bitten by a radioactive spider and he got supernatural power. For a few years Peter used his power to earn money. Unfortunately, one day his uncle was murdered. From this time, Peter decided to use his power to help the other people.

>...., and learns in High School
and GOES

>...., and learns in High School
and GOES to

>...., and learns in High School
and GOES to

Wielkie dzieki dziewczyny ;)

Lucrecia, sorry za pomylke. Oczywiscie, ze "wymieniłAś".

Pozdrawiam i zegam sie. Trzeba to jeszcze zapamietac i isc spac.