proszę o sprawdzenie listu

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Mam ogromna prosbe do wszystkich, którzy znaja angielski lepiej ode mnie.. Bardzo mi zależy, aby ktos sprawdzil moja króciutka prace. Tzn list do kolezanki z wakacji. Mam nadzieje, ze nie bedzie tu duzo bledow, a wszystkie ktore sie pojawia wylapiecie ;) Wiec to moje wypociny (troche bez sensu, ale nic lepszego nie przyszlo mi do glowy:))

Dear Kate,
I thank you for your letter. I'm writting for you from Paris. I'm here with my friends. Have you ever been to France? Here is beautiful!!!
We stayed at secluded guest-house, next to Marsylia. The weather is fantastic! The sun shines very strong, and the wind is warm. We take a sun bath and we swim at the Mediterranean every morning.
We visit many historical monuments and interesting places every day. Yesterday we went to Notre-Dame Cathedral and we admired Eiffle's Tower.
Every evening we stay at restaurant, where we listen to beautiful French music and eat delicious "frutti di mare". We met very nice people here.
We're going to Disneyland tomorrow!
I have to finish my letter. I hope that you spend your holiday magnificently too. Write to me soon, please!
Take care
XYZ
Dear Kate,
I thank you for your letter. I'm writing TO you from Paris. I'm here
with my friends. Have you ever been to France? IT is beautiful HERE!!!
We stay (bez -ed, po co czas przeszły?) IN secluded (odosobniony??) guest-house, next to Marsylia. The weather is
fantastic! The sun shines BRIGHTLY, and the wind is warm. We GO TO THE BEACH FOR A sunbath and we swim IN the Mediterranean every morning.
We visit many historical monuments and interesting places every day.
Yesterday we went to Notre-Dame Cathedral and we admired Eiffle's
Tower.
Every evening we stay IN THE restaurant, where we listen to beautiful,
French music and eat delicious "frutti di mare". We met very nice people here.
We're going to Disneyland tomorrow!
I have to finish my letter. I hope that you ARE SPENDING your holiday magnificently too. Write to me soon, please!
Take care,
XYZ

ogólnie OK :)
>We stay
We are staying in/at (?) an...

>The sun shines
The sun is shining...

>FOR A sunbath
Na pewno z przedimkiem?

>we went to Notre-Dame Cathedral
we went to THE Notre-Dame Cathedral

>admired Eiffle's Tower.
admired THE iffle's Tower.
Dziekuje Wam bardzo za pomoc. Myslicie, ze to jest duzo bledow? Jesli bede pisala czesciej to powinno byc lepiej prawda?
napisałam przecież "ogólnie OK" ;]
prawda, prawda

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