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My favourite book is "Ania z Zielonego Wzgórza". It was written by
>Lucy Mount Montgomery in 1908.It's a novel.The main character is Ania
>Shirley.The story happens in Avonlea in XIX century. The book is about
>a girl who is a daughter of Berta and Walter Shirley, but they are
>dead. Unfortunately usually strange people look after her.She is friendly and she
>likes spending time with her friend.She has got many adventures some
>are funny.She is very talented and wise.She likes to dream.One day she
>dyed her hair because she hates its colour.Kids called her "carrot".
>I liked this book because of it's lively and intriguing plot.Adventures are really fantastic and I read them with a big
>interest.It's a nice book because it's about teenagers problems and
>about their life.
słowo cool było napisane poprawnie ale skoro jest to wypracowanie do szkoły to chyba lepiej żebyś w nim slangu nie używała ;)