Proosze sprawdzic czy mam dobrze

Uprzejmie prosze o skorygowanie tego wypracowania na temat moich wakacji znajduja się tam nieraz polskie sformułowania ktorych nie potrafie napisac :)
Z góry Dziękuje :)

On July and August I traveled with my parents and sister. In 13th July I went to my brother and brothers' wife Kinga with my sister. With my sister and brother's wife driving a car to Lgiń. In lgiń there is litte lake . I like summer because I love swimming . In lake in Lgiń water is warm.
On 22rd July I went to my house. I sometimesgoing to my friend Ola . She is a cool and friendly girl. In August on 24th I going to Karpacz with my sister and parents.I to had a good time with my parents. In Karpacz "poznałam" wiele miłych znajomych z ktorymi utrzymuję kontakt. In carapacz with my parents and sister we climbed on Śnieżka. I've bin on carting track. I love summer because I have a good time.
Chciałabym zeby wakacje trwały wiecznie. Moge powiedzieć ze te wakacje były super

'On' (moze lepiej DURING July and August I travelLed with my parents and sister. 'In' ON THE 13th July I went to my brother and 'brothers'' (nie brother's) wife (na brother's wife mowimy sister-in-law) Kinga with my sister. With my sister and 'brother's wife' (sister-in-law) WE 'driving' DROVE 'a car' (niepotrz)to Lgiń. In lgiń there is A littLe lake. I like THE summer because I love swimming. In THE lake in Lgiń THE water is warm.
On 22rd July I 'went' (czy masz na mysli 'returned'?) to my house. I sometimes 'going' GO to my friend Ola.
'In August on 24th' (zla kol slow - On the 24th August) I 'going' WENT to Karpacz with my sister and parents. I 'to' (czy masz na mysli 'too'?) had a good time with my parents. In Karpacz...I met a lot of nice people with whom I keep in contact.
In Karapacz with my parents and sister we climbed on 'Śnieżka'. I've 'bin' BEEN
on A carting track.
I'd like for my holidays to last for ever. I can say that these holidays were super.