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You see an ad on the Internet for a friendship club for learning English. E-mail to ask for further details.


Dear Sir
I saw on Internet notice for club sie is friends for learning English. I think it would be a very good idea for us all to attend a course.
I think that this would be for me very good idea attend a course .I would like to find out in what deadline sie odbywaja sie these courses ??? How much money need on first course?? As well as I would like to talk on subject effectiveness of English learnedly in this way. I have hopes that your club will send me emaila what to further details. I wait on message.
Yours faithfully

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Dear Sir/Madam,

I saw on the Internet the advertisement for friendship club for learning English and I would like to know if you would be as generous as to send me any further details.
As far as I am concerned, I think that it would be a great idea to attend such a course, because I really need to practice my English. Moreover, I think that learning in a friendly atmosphere would be effective.
Could you write me when the first meeting is going to run? How much does it cost? I will be graetful for any booklet.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
xxx