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Dear Sir / Maddam
I have for Sir / Maddam the very special offer of new record studio. I have hope that every will find in him something for me. We offer for solid customers very attractive conditions: discount to 12.5 % .
Our firm is credible therefore she introduced one small the detail under end of month has not no hires of books.
This caused with delivery of new copies is. We start every day from 8:30 to 5:30. They give every additional information Mike and Sasha.
We wait in our you new studio and have hope that your expectations will fulfil new mixing equipment.
Yours faithful
Hip Hop Recording

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Dear Sir or Madam
I have received a very special offer of the new record studio.
I hope that everyone will find there something interesting for them.
For solid customers we offer many attractions such as - discounts to 12.5%
Our company is credible (sorry ale nie rozumiem zupełnie o co ci chodzi w tym zdaniu ale o company nie możemy powiedzieć "She")
mogłabyś napisać ten list po polsku bo nie bardzo kapuje o co ci chodzi, to chyba tłumacz robił a nie ty. Niektórych rzeczy nie da sie zrozumieć co miałaś na myśli